Thursday, 20 January 2011

Tattoo

I thought it was noble
to have your name
carved across my soul.

Emblazoned for all the world to see.
For loved ones to fear.

4 comments:

  1. One of my favourite lines i've written. Expresses all that needs to be said. And yet when writing this i wasn't sure if to include it, glad you seem to appreachiate it.

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  3. The images willed to life by your poetic person are powerful, and the thoughts of your mind are unique and potent. Wouldn't miss this for the world. That line moves this poem up from awesome to devastating. I'm glad you included it. :)

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