So I kept quiet.
As it all fell apart.
Melting slowly
into silence.
You watched my lips
flounder and fail.
Sunday, 13 March 2011
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Poems written by me. Not written in any particular style they simply express how i was feeling at that moment in time.
Simply amazing.
ReplyDeleteDear Monster, am I the only one who sees your depth and your unique poetic splendor? Perhaps, then, that makes me rare as well. I shall be your poetry fan and faithful reader for as long as my breath lasts, and for as long as you continue to write and post. There is no writer of your age and gender who compares. I promise this is true. I've read THOUSANDS of amateur poems and there are many forms of excellence and brilliance, but you are one of a kind and I will say this publicly, privately, and in all sincerity because it is true. No agenda, just admiration.
ReplyDeleteA very kind comment indeed. To be truthful none of my friends know I write and here and piptalk are the only places i post. I write simply for me and the fact that you apreachiate them makes it all worth while. x
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