Saturday 19 February 2011

What we use to be

So seldom
do I hear your voice
settle on my outstretched palm.
Stirring what little
is left within delicate lines.
I wrap warped fingers
against the pull of the tide
as your whisper fades.

3 comments:

  1. This is very nearly a perfect poem.

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  2. Some times i wonder if my poems make any sense to anybody apart from me, so it's nice to know you appreciate them. Thanks.

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