Tuesday 3 May 2011

Girl

Those beautiful girls
s t r e t c h e d o u t
for all to admire.

Clinging
tightly on to
each others hand.

I was paper thin.

2 comments:

  1. You break my heart, Queen Monster. I love this so much! I love it when I can feel what's being said, and you are the Mistress of excellent word choices.

    Regarding your comment on mine, I hope it was a good memory for you. The girl I wrote about was an online friend. We were close enough as poetry tag partners that one day I sent her an enormous box of pink socks, and she was tickled and overwhelmed. So she sent me a scented lock of her hair. I was so moved by the gesture that I wrote of my love for her as my friend, and it included those elements. I hope you enjoyed it. :)

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  2. s t r e t c h e d o u t indeed.

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